Though I don't necessarily write in response to them, I enjoy the daily prompts on NaPoWriMo http://www.napowrimo.net/ and Robert Lee Brewer's "Poetic Asides" blog: http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/poetic-asides. Today's poem is sort of a mash-up of the two: NaPoWriMo's "fourteener" in which every line has fourteen syllables (use as many or as few lines as you like) and Brewer's prompt to write a poem about a machine (the term "machine" can be applied very loosely). I recommend checking out both blogs daily for both inspiration and entertainment.
And now, without further ado, here's this morning's effort (with a pretty lame title, so if you have any suggestions, or any other comments, I'd be delighted if you'd share them in the comment section below):
TECHNOLOGIES AND TINDERBOXES
“Well,
that was before we had technology,” the kid says
from
the back corner. He wears his baseball cap backwards, slumps
low
in his seat. Last week when I said write about something
that
interests you, he asked if he’d get a lower grade
if
it was boring. “Well, duh,” I said. Some kids squirmed at that.
“So
what do you all think ‘technology’ means?” I ask them.
Computers,
they say. Even my ninety-year-old mother,
who
is not in this class, but is in some ways as much a
product
of ‘technology’ as they are, says that. Cable
TV,
TMZ, smartphone, a lifeline, she’s got it all,
even
if she doesn’t wear the lifeline, doesn’t charge the
phone,
and thinks real people mess with her internet server
just
to annoy her or make her think she’s going crazy.
“There
was a time, you know,” I say, “when hammerstones and
a
piece of obsidian constituted radical
technology.”
I catch myself before I say “I can
remember
when . . . .” Probably some of them already think
I’m
that old. “And candles. Can you even imagine what
a
revolution they must have been? Artificial light,
whenever
you wanted it, without building a real fire?
But
to light them you’d need matches, or before that, flint and
tinder
that you could carry around in a little box
on
a string around your neck.” And all of them look pensive,
their minds like tinder, I think, if I could find the right flint.
When
I was a little girl my grandmother told me a
story
about a soldier who stole a tinderbox from
a
witch; he used it to get rich and marry a princess.
Grandma
didn’t tell me what a tinderbox was, or how
it
worked. She’d grown up with matches, after all,
and
besides, the tinderbox was magic, got from a witch.
I never
expected to understand magic, only
hoped
I’d be smart enough to recognize and use it if
I
got the chance. Like hammerstones. Like matches. Like candles.
Nicely done! Technology: like fourteen syllables per line.
ReplyDeleteGreat! Love the line: "their minds like tinder, I think, if I could find the right flint."
ReplyDelete